其实写作并不是越长越好。比如，在主段落的论证部分，长句比短句更充分、更具体，因为长句涵盖的信息更多。让我给你介绍一下：雅思写作如何拓长句子.我们一起来看看吧。
使用介词短语：比如in a polite way，with the advance of…，to some extent，in some sense…
比如一个背景句：Children are exposed to advertisements，这是一篇关于儿童广告该不该被禁止的作文。这个背景句加上几个介词短语，比如什么时候，在哪里，会更加具有时代性。
可以改为：
In today’s society, children are exposed to mountains of advertisements everywhere, from billboards at the subway station or on the Internet or TV.
使用修饰词：adj & adv
Adj+N:a job–a well-paid and decent job.
Adv+adj: beneficial–mutually beneficial;highly addictive;financially independent.
V+adv: communicate with others more efficiently and swiftly
使用并列结构：比如or， and，either…or，not only…but also…
比如：学好外语增加了求职机会。
翻译为：Mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a job.
通过并列结构扩展：Mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a job within the home country or of finding work abroad .
通过修饰词拓展：Mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a well-paid and decent job within the home country or of finding work abroad .
通过介词短语拓展：Mastering a foreign language increases the chances of finding a well-paid and decent job in a multinational company within the home country or of finding work abroad .
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